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Chapter 1

One day the pupils at BSG were sitting in C4, being bored and doing algebra, when all of a sudden out of the box in which he hid, sprung the fat rat, so called because he was fat, and had a ratty personality.
Out he sprang from his cardboard box, and made a terrible roar which filled everyones ears with gloom and doom, he towered over the children who cowered in fear.
One pupil however, was brave enough to speak up.
"Oi! Fat Rat! You're here to teach, not fill us with terror!"
She was immediatly blasted into oblivion by the fat rat's sharp fangs sinking into her arm.
With an agonising scream, she was plunged into the land of the dead bodies (the dark cupboard) and, slamming the door, fat rat returned to his box, stinky and satisfied of an hours feeding.
From the last comment, you can see this happened hourly, and pupils were growing low, they would have to lure some more into their midst....

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