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01.03-2009 07:51:08
Re: Crossing
Yes, I like the concept of this one very much. I´ve read Adele´s comments and I think she´s just about said it all. I agree with her comments and don´t have much to add. The only possible suggestion is to wonder whether a stanza break would work after `the line manager screams´.

- mike horwood
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