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01.03-2009 22:42:18
Re: Crossing
Yes, I've read Mike's comments. I quite like to write in one solid block myself, but it can be worth trying stanza breaks in a poem just to experiment and see how it changes. A stanza break after line 6, and another after *the line manager screams*.
Very neat poem.

- Adele

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